Have hope..
For hope is the only thing stronger than fear..
Blind to the light,
Lost the urge to fight,
Invisible to the world,
I’d tried and burned
They tried to help
But even I couldn’t help myself
So I shut them out,
Now that’s the decision I doubt
I was losing hope,
No more I could cope,
I almost surrendered,
Enough I had suffered
Then I saw you,
A silhouette in the dark,
A tinge of colour,
A fiery spark
You came towards me,
Your face I couldn’t see,
You took my hand,
And lead me away from this strange land
You took me somewhere,
With lush green grass,
The sky a royal blue,
The sun a shade off brass
You lead me into the sun,
I went with you into the sunrise,
I took a breath, and
Closed my eyes
Then you whispered in my ear,
I heard what you said, loud and clear,
I could start again, I knew,
I knew I could endure
So I put myself in the spotlight,
And went back to fight,
I walked through hell,
And became an angel
And..
I knew I could do this,
I knew I could cope,
I knew I could survive
For, you were hope…
May 4, 2020 at 11:49 am
I don’t think this is your best work…like,from my view. We write in different ways because our feelings and views always change. The view you had when you wrote this has been composed in a very clear and almost magnificent way that it has made the reader love it… and maybe even the author. Or perhaps,it is relatable for the author…
But, as a reader,none of your works are ranked above each other. They all lie in one level for me…
Beautiful,magnificent,exceptional, and as always…the best.
April 29, 2020 at 6:39 am
Too good, your best till date.
April 29, 2020 at 9:51 am
Thanks a ton, dadei…
But the thing is, that almost everyone who has read this loves this the most (including me), so the pressure is tremendous now…
April 28, 2020 at 4:52 pm
Your words are something I cannot get enough of . Beautiful words . Well done !!
April 28, 2020 at 3:17 pm
One of the most beautiful poems you have written. How I want to give my perspective of your poem, but somehow I couldnt,the poem is lovely in its form. Loved it
April 28, 2020 at 3:12 pm
Well welll.. hope is the only constant in this hopeless world 😊. Beautifully expressed in words what all of us must have faced at some point in our lives. Keep writing.
April 28, 2020 at 6:07 am
Blogger,loved this poem to the core. So much of positive vibes.Keep the positivity mode on and keep them coming. Good piece.😊